Changed to "inspired aspects of" in one case (none of them are inspiring the whole thing, just one of the factors). "informed" feels a little over-used, maybe switch one out for "inspired" or something else?. Yep, but "filming went ahead in Cape Town" to avoid repetition of "took place". taking place six days per week for five weeks.[""? Filming went ahead six days per week for five weeks. Maybe merge "filming took place in Cape Town, South Africa. #Rachel jack and ashley too black mirror wiki series#
Don't you normally have a sentence in the main part of each article about it being an anthology series and hence viewed in any order etc?. when ordered to by the police to save a cheeky two words. "when the police order them to" -> "when ordered to do so by the police". by using Kevin's mouse stunner and a syringe of medication. Yep, and I've cut a few words in the process to make room for the point above. "stunning the first with Kevin's mouse stunner" stun on repeat. I was eliding an important detail which I've now added: Jack returns Ashley Too to Rachel, who chooses not to use it, and six months later, the doll is reactivated by a news report on Ashley O's coma and malfunctions. "the doll overhears" is it worth that the doll is "reactivated" when overhearing a news report on whether Ashley will "wake up"? It's very "Alexa.". Something like this?: For her fifteenth birthday, Rachel receives Ashley Too ( Miley Cyrus), an artificial intelligence (AI) robot doll of her favourite pop star Ashley O. "personality is modelled on " isn't it deeper than that?. Yeah, "a clone of Ashley O's personality" is good. "is a clone of Ashley O" well, it's a clone of her personality (or brain) in a six inch robotic toy. Can we fill in the "n.a." in File:Rachel jack and ashley too black mirror.jpg?. 
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